Rejection and shunning with a whiff of constructiveness

“A sincere and smartly constructed indie rock and art rock slow ballad with a classic sort of feel and approach. Warmly produced but genre wise it lacked a tad bit more here to really take off even more in a fresh new way”.

We All Want Someone To Shout For on We got what we wanted, why are we unhappy? – 14/05/21


“Thanks for sending. I like the weight of the lyrics. The instruments are solid. The vocal is a bit too pitchy for us. Needs a bit more polish there and execution to win me over. Best of luck!”.

Blanket Fort on We got what we wanted, why are we unhappy? – 14/05/21


“Hey Sham, thank you for your submission. I really like the instrumental part in the beginning of the song and also the calm piano parts. This is definitely the strongest side of the track. To my humble opinion the song would shine more if you put the lead vocal forward a bit more. Wishing you all the best, Fudo”.

不動 一樹 of Ultra Vague wrote on I’m Coming Through – 13/05/21


 

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